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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 19, 2004 22:12:26 GMT -5
Chain me down, a darkness holds my heart, A chronic anger cascades through my bones My eternal hell watches over me…<br>My eternal prison, holds me down against my deepest will.
I chased the stars for you through the raven sky. I held them up to the night wishes, I dared to dream of a full harvest moon for you But never did I dream of my eternal hell.
Storm rose out of the dark horizon with rolling clouds of memory Black lightening stirs the sky over head Deafening Thunder teased at my mind and the chains rattled and burned at my skin. The shards of a crystal rain tosses in my hair lain on the ground before
I Roamed far for your heart to love, to lift me up to touch the sun kissed roses of the night sky To drink of the beads of sweet dew that comes from the mist of the moons pieces of heaven. I strung my heart for you to hold a note of music, I bled for your divine melody. I grieve night after night for see your pure elegance…the valor you carry proves your love to me.
The night curses me with these bindings that torment my mind of your image This cells walls do not arise to meet the sunrises midnight silk reign Darkness all round my deep thoughts and dieing body. All I want is for you to want me, till my bitter sweet end.
(I was really upset when I wrote this, so It means quite alot to me. I hope you guys like. I dunno if it has any connection to Inuyasha or anything, would it?)
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Sept 19, 2004 23:11:35 GMT -5
Awwh, it's very good, Chibi-Me! My favorite part is "I chased the stars for you through the raven sky." So purdyful... ;.;
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 20, 2004 18:35:14 GMT -5
Na, na!! I really appericate it!!^^ Thanks me-sama!! *huggles* Sake!!!
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 6, 2004 23:06:09 GMT -5
Is me-sama the only one who apperciates it?...Oh well...meh!
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Post by darkmooneternal on Oct 11, 2004 3:04:19 GMT -5
ChibiKikyou this is absolutely beautiful! You should make a song..that would be so darn cool ^-^ I agree with lady kikyou about the line "I chased the stars for you through the raven sky" It makes me so sad...especially since I can really relate to that line...and you know what I mean when I say that *cries* but I think I'm better now..I hope you are too. I can feel so much emotion from this poem...reminds me of things...makes me want to cry...it's so beautiful.
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 11, 2004 3:10:17 GMT -5
Arigatou, DarkMoonEternal, As you knew when I wrote that I was very upset about something! And I am making it into a song and It'll be on piano so I'm getting Madi to play the piano as I sing it. Good enough? That measn alot to me knowing people can relate to that. This is my greatest peice, I hope you all enjoy it.
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Post by Meiling on Oct 11, 2004 3:18:52 GMT -5
Aaaaawwww, this is so pretty!
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 11, 2004 3:29:53 GMT -5
Aaaaawwww, this is so pretty! Pretty but a great message behind it
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Post by Meiling on Oct 11, 2004 3:32:28 GMT -5
yep.
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 11, 2004 3:50:55 GMT -5
What do you see out of it?
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Post by darkmooneternal on Oct 11, 2004 3:57:51 GMT -5
Arigatou, DarkMoonEternal, As you knew when I wrote that I was very upset about something! And I am making it into a song and It'll be on piano so I'm getting Madi to play the piano as I sing it. Good enough? That measn alot to me knowing people can relate to that. This is my greatest peice, I hope you all enjoy it. I definately enjoyed it and I can't wait to hear it as a song! You'll have to show me when it's done^-^. I love it to no end. I agree with you that it is your best piece, and having seen a lot of your work, that's saying something because all of your work is good.
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Post by Chibi-Kouga on Oct 11, 2004 12:10:51 GMT -5
Nice..........................How long it take you to make it?
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 12, 2004 20:00:36 GMT -5
Nice..........................How long it take you to make it? It took me about a night or so and like 10 minutes to finish the last line...I put my heart and soul into it, actually...Yeah dark, It does say alot, It may be evern better then my drawings!!! GAH what has the world come to?!
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Oct 26, 2004 23:53:20 GMT -5
MAN!!Madi ditched me on writing the song! GOD!!! thats someone you can't trust(Not like I ever did trust her)
Ok for those who don't know: Madi is the girl who was helping me turn this to a song on the piano and I sing it but she just said its to damn hard! I'LL SHOW YOU TO DAMN HARD!!!!
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Post by Chibi-Kouga on Oct 27, 2004 18:53:54 GMT -5
O.o? Madi? You means Sadi? My Washu-Friend?
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