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Post by rin on Sept 20, 2003 12:41:02 GMT -5
Rin was bored, so wrote a poem about Inuyasha and Kikyou. But it's more about Kikyou's point of view to Inuyasha. Here it goes!^^....
Because of Your Lies.... By Rin
Falling down in deep despair, I said I'd always wait, until you were there, I promised you I'd never leave your side, No matter what, even if I died, If you were ever in help or need, I swore I'd be there, and never leave, And now since what I said has lead to death, I tried to tell you everything, with one last breath, When my eyes were filled with tears, All my sorrow, was left within my fears, When I waited for you, and you never came, My heart, my mind, and soul got filled with shame, I'm now nothing left, but a torchered soul, But now my hatred, has taken it's tole, Your lies of love left me with nothing, So now I'm going to give you something, Something you've never felt before, Something beyond sorrow, and futhermore, Something to lead you to your demise, Something just because of your lies....
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Sept 20, 2003 12:46:11 GMT -5
Wow... that was... pretty... *sobs* and so sad... yet so true... *huggles Rin* I didn't know you were a poet, Ri-chan!! That was so goooood!!!! So good that it makes me wanna cry....
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Post by rin on Sept 20, 2003 12:57:49 GMT -5
Rin LOVES and THANKS ALL of YOU who enjoys Rin's work in poetry!!!!!! YAY!^^
- Rin chan^^
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Sept 20, 2003 13:09:59 GMT -5
Everyone, clap for Rin!!! *claps* Such a good poet at such a young age... Impressive, to say the least!!!
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Post by Sadi on Sept 22, 2003 23:06:16 GMT -5
Woohoo. *claps* Rawr, I'm working on a couple of IY poems and songs ...
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Post by ChibiSesshoumaru on Sept 24, 2003 17:35:43 GMT -5
W000000000000000T!! *claps and claps and claps and claps* EXCELLENT work, Rin-chan. I'm jealous of your rhyming ability. ^^ Still, I wuv this!! *slaps a "cS's Choice" sticky note on da poem*
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Post by Sadi on Sept 27, 2003 17:24:24 GMT -5
Rawr. Hrm...
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Post by BloodstainedShards on Oct 22, 2003 17:31:00 GMT -5
It was really, really good! -has tears spilling down her face- Oh, the emotion...
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Post by Sadi on Oct 22, 2003 18:15:00 GMT -5
x3...The 'emotionless' one weeps!? Oh my, oh dear...
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Post by su6arhighfreak on Apr 10, 2004 14:26:46 GMT -5
Wow... so prettyful!!!! ;D Ahhh!!! Me so jealous!! The only poetry I can write is the Dr. Suess type ones!!! >.< What rhymes with cookie??? Dookie?! XD
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Post by ChibiSesshoumaru on Apr 10, 2004 14:32:53 GMT -5
Bookie? o.o;;
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Post by Sadi on Apr 10, 2004 14:39:38 GMT -5
Snookie...Looky ...
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Post by anna on Apr 10, 2004 15:01:29 GMT -5
THAT WAS WONDERFUL*claps*words cant describe how awesome it was
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Post by Hikari on Apr 25, 2004 11:49:01 GMT -5
That was the BEST!!!!! Woo-hoo! Go Rin!
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