All Seem to Say....

[rin]

Another poem that Rin wrote thats kinda creepy^^)
Enjoy!....

"All Seem to Say...."
By Rin-chan^^)

Cut into my skin,
Feel my pain within,
As I try to warn,
Hearing others mourn,
Seeing others torn,
Watching creatures form,
All seem to say,
Carry me away....

Everything you stole,
Take away my soul,
Lying on the ground,
Making unnamed sounds,
Love makes me sick,
So hate is what I pick,
All seem to say,
Tearing me away....

Everything you lose,
What you seem to choose,
When I had to wait,
They said I was to late,
Walking through the hole,
Nothing that I know,
All seem to say,
Draging me away....

Past night and day,
Seeing pale gray,
All to my dismay,
What I had to pay,
As I fall and lay,
All seem to say,
Taking me away.....
Taking me away.....

[Lady Kikyou]

Great job once again, Rin-chan^^ *gives cookies* I don't think this one is that creepy, though. If anything, it sounds a bit angsty, but not creepy^^

[ChibiSesshoumaru]

Another goody dark poem, Rin-chan. ^_^
You are a true poet! *claps*

[Sadi]

Glad to see you're following my advice about the less = better as far as words. ^_~...Muy bien!