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Post by rin on Dec 31, 2003 13:59:50 GMT -5
Things are not what they used to be, Hopefully you will also see, When will it end or begin? Everything was so different then, I grieve, You leave, I cry, You sigh, I still miss, whats not there, I still see you everywhere, Maybe it will begin or end? Everything was different then, You leave, I grieve, You sigh, I cry, I wish I could carry on, And forgot everything,so long, Maybe it will finnish or start? Now we are just torn apart, I grieve, You leave, I cry, You sigh, I can't tell what I miss, But it's something I can't list, Maybe it will start or finnish, It's what I'll just have to miss, You leave, I grieve, You sigh, I cry . . . - Rin
Yeah it's just some poem I came up with right now.
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Post by Kanna on Dec 31, 2003 14:01:53 GMT -5
omgggggggggg it's --really-- good!! ::makes it start raining candy:: great job!!!!!!!!!!! I really loike it ^-^
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Post by rin on Dec 31, 2003 14:05:40 GMT -5
oh thankyou agian Kanna chan!!! *gives you Hershy Kisses and Hershy Huggs* ;D
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Post by ChibiSesshoumaru on Dec 31, 2003 11:13:07 GMT -5
Sooo...awesome. ^_^ You really do have a gift for this, Rin-chan.
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Post by Sadi on Dec 31, 2003 12:09:14 GMT -5
-dumps a trusty bucket-o-kettlecorn on your head- Wee ^^...
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Post by ChibiSesshoumaru on Dec 31, 2003 12:17:27 GMT -5
*mouth waters but refrains, as it is meant for the great poet*
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Post by Sadi on Dec 31, 2003 12:55:56 GMT -5
-gives cS a mini-bucket ^^-
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Post by rin on Jan 1, 2004 8:53:49 GMT -5
awww, thankyou you two!!! ;D * gives you carmel popcorn and ice cream*
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Jan 2, 2004 8:06:04 GMT -5
~Very very good, Rin-chan!!!! *showers Rin with 5457832464564378 happy cookies* I missed seeing your wonderful poems around here!!!! ^____^
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Post by Sadi on Jan 2, 2004 16:51:53 GMT -5
Ja. They were always so nice to read...
Sessh: >.> You act like she's dead...
*eyes water* WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...-runs off crying-
Sessh: o.o...Freak.
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Post by BloodstainedShards on Jan 14, 2004 17:30:58 GMT -5
Beautiful! Your poetry is always so good ^^ I'm so envious of everyone's talents :X
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Post by Sadi on Jan 14, 2004 18:06:58 GMT -5
You shouldn't be! We all SUCK! SUCK I SAY! >.>...
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