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Post by HanyouGirl on Mar 26, 2004 16:28:29 GMT -5
Pick me up hold me close don't ever let me go my love take my soul hold it tight never let it go tonight
you picked me up when i have fallen wiped away my tears tell me its alright pick me up and hold me close and never ever forget i love you
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Post by Sadi on Mar 30, 2004 20:35:00 GMT -5
Not bad.
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Post by anna on Mar 30, 2004 22:00:36 GMT -5
*claps*bravo ^_^
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Post by Katana on Apr 7, 2004 21:58:46 GMT -5
Everyone's so good at writing except me! *sobs*
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Post by anna on Apr 8, 2004 15:56:34 GMT -5
actually,you're not the only one.i suck at poetry
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Apr 8, 2004 22:25:34 GMT -5
Lol, poetry is not one of my best traits, either! XD
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Post by anna on Apr 8, 2004 22:35:43 GMT -5
lol so i guess that makes 3 of us
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Post by Katana on Apr 9, 2004 8:25:47 GMT -5
Not only do I suck at ficwriting, but I am the worst poet of all poets...I have two, one being on hands (school) and the other was also for school about auroras. They suck all... I'm so untallented...
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Post by Hikari on Apr 25, 2004 11:52:30 GMT -5
Not at all bad. Short and sweet!
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