me's poetry

[anna]

this really doesn't have anything to do with sess/kik but you might find that it sounds like Kikyou
i suck at poetry so i guess this poem has an excuse to suck


Loneliness

Crying these days away,
I wonder why I'm here
i know there is nothing to do
but fight my inner struggles
But i don't know why i linger here

In my heart is lack of confidence
Being replaced by hatred and sorrow
Life can take away happiness,
yet it won't take away pain

Everyday is the same,
I cry so much without a sound
I stand in the shadows
wanting to be found
I know that day will never come
So i guess loneliness is my destiny.....

[ChibiKikyou]

Great Poem Anna Banana! ^^ I can't believe nobody comented on it. It's very good and it does have a Kikyou kind of feel to it. ^^ Great stuff

[Chibi-Kouga]

Jenenji: Honestly, I didn't see it! Nice work! **changed name!**

[anna]

thankes

[ChibiKikyou]

Your welcome and you are a poet! I think so at least, doesn't mean it sucks when you say it does.

[anna]

*teary eyes* really?^^

[ChibiKikyou]

really really! ^^ I hate it when people say their peotry sucks. they can say it about their drawings...never poetry! ^^

[anna]

but what if their poetry does suck?(i'm not talking about anyone here)

[ChibiKikyou]

yeah, no it does. It doesn't have to have fancy words or a deep meaning. It's still beautiful even if it's like this

I pondered thoughtfully...
It burned my mind...
Ouch.

[darkmooneternal]

It's so pretty! ^-^ I love it very much. I can definately see how it might relate to Kikyou. It's cool that you chose a point of view most people don't take.

[anna]

thank you^^i'm starting to feel better about my poetry

[victoria45]

oh its really good