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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 25, 2005 19:06:01 GMT -5
*Blinks* Wow, who would have thought that I would actually write another poem...considering how bad I am...Well, anyway hope you'll like it...at least... [shadow=black,left,300] My special someone, Who brightens up my world Like the rays of the sun Who was my whole world.
He was always there for me; Always who I wanted to be. No matter where he went I, too was always there for him Like he was there for me.
Through the good times and Bad, From joy to pain; to anger and to gloomy sad; From night to day, He would always stay.
Never was I alone, Nor chilled to the bone For he would always be there, To lend me himself, his smile, his warmth, his care. So I would never be alone; Almost like he was mine to own.
Even though he is gone And my life is almost half way done I am never alone, Nor on my own. For I still have him here with me, Here in my heart...[/shadow]What did you think? I wrote this today in school during my 3/5 mod english class...I really don't know why, but I thought of Kikeh saying this to Sesshy and I thought, "Hey, what the heck?" So, I hoped you liked it...*Smiles shyly*
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Apr 25, 2005 21:51:06 GMT -5
Awwh, it's purdy! ^^ *claps* The only thing I don't get is why she says he's gone....o.o; Did Sessheh leave her or something..? ;0;</3
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 17:06:20 GMT -5
*Blushes* You think that was good? Well, arigatou Rubeh-chan! *Smiles* Oh, and about the think in the end where she says Even though he is gone... And so on. I forgot to mention this, but as I was in my 3/5 class my friend (Who's a Sess/Kik fan too ^o^) Wrote this ficcie where Sesshy died protecting her from Naraku...(It was a "What if" fic of hers) And when I read it, I was half way down to tears. So in that gloomy mood at the thought of our beloved Sesshomaru dying to save the one he loves...
I wrote this as a kinda view point and overlook Kikeh might have saw...Or something like that. Don't know, but I just wrote what she would have thought...Knowing that Naraku still needs to be stopped and such, she would not kill herself until -After- Naraku is slain...Plus it would be like a sort of revenge for what he done...yay, something like that...But anyway, that's how I wrote it! But once again thanks Rubeh-chan! ;D
So no worries!! Sesshy would never break her heart like his Inu-Koro brother did! ]}]}---------> <3 *Bang* Lol!!
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Apr 26, 2005 17:14:16 GMT -5
Ah, I see. ^^ So Sessheh went all Soi-like on Kikeh, huh..? XD~~
Yes, I -am- obsessed with Naka/Soi. Sue me. XD
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 17:26:39 GMT -5
XDDDDD Now, I remember where I got the idea of Sesshy's deathy!! From both the ficcie and Soi-sama!!! XDDDD Yeah, I guess he did do what Soi-sama did...XD *Sess: Of course I would do it like that Soi-onna!! If it is to save my Kikeh, I would do anything...Even give my very own life!* XDDDDDD But hey you may be obsessed with Naka/Soi and Sess/Kik, my main two that I'm crazy for is Inu/San And Sess/Kik...XDDDDD and don't forget my other 15 couples I told ya about!! XDDDDD Hey, don't sue me now!!!! XDDDDD
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Post by Lightangel_Kikyo on Apr 26, 2005 18:28:56 GMT -5
Yes I believe your poem is very lovely. And I am glad u wrote another one. ;D
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 18:53:37 GMT -5
Lol! Thanks LightAngel_Kikyo! I'm glad you liked it! I hope you'll write another poem too, after all I got the idea after I read your Untitled one! Thanks for inspiring me, Hikari-no-Tenshi_Kikyo! ;D
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Post by Chibi-Kouga on Apr 26, 2005 19:06:41 GMT -5
Hikari-no-Tenshi_Kikyo! ;D Hmmmmmmmmmmm................. Lemme guess.............. Kikyou, the angel of Heart?
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 19:16:52 GMT -5
XDDD Close Kouga-kun! It actually means LightAngel_Kikyo...XDDD it's her name in Japanese...well, as close as I could write it...because like Sadi-chan said, some names could mean one thing to one person, but to others it could mean something else...But you were close, or you could be right as well...Either way we could be both right as far as I know!! ;D
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Apr 26, 2005 19:26:03 GMT -5
Yup. ^^ 'Heart' would be something like 'kokoro'... Like... like... the seishi symbol on Nakago-sama's forehead! :3~~
....Someone stop me. Seriously. XD
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Post by Lightangel_Kikyo on Apr 26, 2005 19:27:18 GMT -5
Lol! Well that's a first, I never heard that one before. Thanks ha, I'm embarassed now again. Well I'm glad inspired you to write that poem cuz really that's a first I ever inspired someone to write something that pretty, normal it something like u inspired me to became a better person or to study harder something simple like that. ;D
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 19:35:41 GMT -5
Lol!! Well, LightAngel_Kikyo, it's about time that someone got inspired by you...And it was me! And I gotta say thanks again! Hehee, I hope I write another poem almost as good as yours...but that's a far-fetched dream...*sigh* but hey, I can dream ne? Well, thanks once more, LightAngel_Kikyo!! ;D
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Post by Lightangel_Kikyo on Apr 26, 2005 19:53:43 GMT -5
Lol! Gosh, what are u trying to do embarass the heck out of me. Gosh, u know how to flatter a person don't you. ;D lol. But hey I did write another one if you want to read it u can. But it's just okay nothing special.
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Post by Tamashii_No_Miko on Apr 26, 2005 20:00:12 GMT -5
Lol!! Of course I'll read it!! I'll go lookie right now!!! Hehee!!! And don't call it "Nothing special!" That's suppost to be My line to say!!! Lol!! Anyway, I'll go ready now!! *hops to LightAngel-chan's poem*
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Post by Lightangel_Kikyo on Apr 27, 2005 15:10:12 GMT -5
You're right it isn't nothing special. Instead it is an emotionally sadden song. *Sighs* I think am I going to become grown to become one of the published authors that call a tormented or depressing writer. lol.
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