Post by Lightangel_Kikyo on Apr 26, 2005 19:05:27 GMT -5
I was freewriting in band and I came up with this song though I am probably going to shorten it or something maybe chop it into pieces. *Sighs* It's okay I guess.
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Worrying about the days which seem so long. While carrying the burden of them all. Never really understanding the depth of my pain. Or if the rain will ever cease falling for me.
But every life got its trials and tribulations. But it take someone of inner strength to make it through. And to stay tall and say I got to continue on and not look back at what's lost. So this heart can bear the torment of defeat and embrace it. Then let it go.
A feeling so strong, a truth so well known. Guiding me through the sleepless nights. That are so full of bitterness and misery which reflects on what I feel inside.
A shadow's home, a nurturing doubt which haunts any thoughts of hope. Which keeps me so confused in my own soul that I sometimes end up questioning my fate which feels so close and yet so far to being any help to me. But still I have the strength to endure it all and still remain as I am.
For every life got its trials and tribulations. But it takes someone with inner strength to make it through and to stand tall and say I got to continue on and not look back at what's lost. So this heart can bear the torment of defeat and embrace it. Then let it go.
The fire has burned, an innocence lost. All of my tears have been shred. I'm not a child no more. I can deal with the pain, all on my own. Cuz my journey not done, and I won't cave in, til my very last breath.
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Worrying about the days which seem so long. While carrying the burden of them all. Never really understanding the depth of my pain. Or if the rain will ever cease falling for me.
But every life got its trials and tribulations. But it take someone of inner strength to make it through. And to stay tall and say I got to continue on and not look back at what's lost. So this heart can bear the torment of defeat and embrace it. Then let it go.
A feeling so strong, a truth so well known. Guiding me through the sleepless nights. That are so full of bitterness and misery which reflects on what I feel inside.
A shadow's home, a nurturing doubt which haunts any thoughts of hope. Which keeps me so confused in my own soul that I sometimes end up questioning my fate which feels so close and yet so far to being any help to me. But still I have the strength to endure it all and still remain as I am.
For every life got its trials and tribulations. But it takes someone with inner strength to make it through and to stand tall and say I got to continue on and not look back at what's lost. So this heart can bear the torment of defeat and embrace it. Then let it go.
The fire has burned, an innocence lost. All of my tears have been shred. I'm not a child no more. I can deal with the pain, all on my own. Cuz my journey not done, and I won't cave in, til my very last breath.
Me? You're kidding ne? *shocked beyond words* I mean, I can understand where I got inspired, but for people to get inspired by me...that never happened!! *smiles* Well, if I was able to encourage you to do this piece of amazing work then I must say; "You're very welcome!!!" ;D And as I said ^ there, you keep this up!! I know, with this writing of yours, you could be a poet!!! ^-^ Pleaz keep this up! And thanks again for reading my poem (even tho' it's not anywhere as good as yours) XDDDDD You'll go far LightAngel_Kikyo-chan, I know it!! ;D 
Hehe. ;D