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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 1, 2004 17:13:34 GMT -5
Harden your heart With a sheen of ice against your beating life Your strong against it But why do you constantly think of her?
Steel like eyes think of pain, think of death destroy all images of love but you sing for her still
personality of death Hate everyone you pass by slaughter your enemys with out hesitation Why do you constantly wish to hold her?
Mind of wickedness Imagine death of your arch-nemisis make it come true Her image is still in your mind? but why?
Your heart, your mind fixed on her image her heart in yours as one your mind, so pure of her tension could it be love has you by the heart?
Your heart has softened Your eyes a amber yellow and warm your personality, to give life with your sword Your mind, no image of wickedness...love has taught you well...
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Post by Sadi on Sept 1, 2004 18:01:58 GMT -5
Hmmm. Interesting. I like it.
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 1, 2004 20:54:29 GMT -5
Hehe, Thanks I had fun doing it, yes it is quite interesting. Its describing Sesshoumaru and how he should be but kikyou has changed all that. I don't know how that came to mind but it just did, enjoy. ^^
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Post by Lady Kikyou on Sept 1, 2004 22:09:19 GMT -5
*glomps new Sess/Kiky poem* Whee! This Ruby loves it! Very good, Chibi-me!! *gives ya sake*
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 3, 2004 17:02:08 GMT -5
*DROOLS...*Sake....*downs it in half a second* muhahaha....goodness
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Post by midoriko on Sept 5, 2004 19:05:40 GMT -5
*drools* Dang sake! lol
Oooh. I give this poem an A++ !!!
Me really loves it!
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Sept 5, 2004 22:19:50 GMT -5
OO thanks!! I always liked poems, THANKYOU 2 YEARS OF RPING!!
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Post by darkmooneternal on Oct 29, 2004 19:39:13 GMT -5
lol ChibiKikyou you're so entertaining. This one is also really good. I think you showed it to me before...when you had just posted it...but I didn't post a comment...so now I will. I like this one a lot. It fits perfectly for Sess/Kik.
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Feb 6, 2005 13:29:13 GMT -5
WOOOP!!
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Post by darkmooneternal on Mar 9, 2005 10:35:57 GMT -5
lol ooooh yes ^-^!
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Post by anna on Mar 9, 2005 17:18:40 GMT -5
thats really good!O.O way better than my poetry
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Post by Lady_KeKe on Aug 9, 2005 11:51:01 GMT -5
Ana ur poetry is good too. Chibikikyo this is really good. I really enjoyed it.
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Post by Sadi on Aug 15, 2005 1:40:30 GMT -5
Yes. Like I said, it's quite lovely. My poems rhyme too much, so it's always a treat to read a good, non-rhyming one.
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