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Post by anna on Feb 1, 2005 21:34:21 GMT -5
this really doesn't have anything to do with sess/kik but you might find that it sounds like Kikyou i suck at poetry so i guess this poem has an excuse to suck
Loneliness
Crying these days away, I wonder why I'm here i know there is nothing to do but fight my inner struggles But i don't know why i linger here
In my heart is lack of confidence Being replaced by hatred and sorrow Life can take away happiness, yet it won't take away pain
Everyday is the same, I cry so much without a sound I stand in the shadows wanting to be found I know that day will never come So i guess loneliness is my destiny.....
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Feb 13, 2005 15:26:06 GMT -5
Great Poem Anna Banana! ^^ I can't believe nobody comented on it. It's very good and it does have a Kikyou kind of feel to it. ^^ Great stuff
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Post by Chibi-Kouga on Feb 13, 2005 17:30:00 GMT -5
Jenenji: Honestly, I didn't see it! Nice work! **changed name!**
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Post by anna on Feb 13, 2005 20:00:53 GMT -5
thankes
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Feb 14, 2005 21:27:58 GMT -5
Your welcome and you are a poet! I think so at least, doesn't mean it sucks when you say it does.
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Post by anna on Feb 14, 2005 22:02:48 GMT -5
*teary eyes* really?^^
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Feb 16, 2005 19:37:14 GMT -5
really really! ^^ I hate it when people say their peotry sucks. they can say it about their drawings...never poetry! ^^
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Post by anna on Feb 16, 2005 20:54:56 GMT -5
but what if their poetry does suck?(i'm not talking about anyone here)
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Post by ChibiKikyou on Feb 16, 2005 23:57:56 GMT -5
yeah, no it does. It doesn't have to have fancy words or a deep meaning. It's still beautiful even if it's like this
I pondered thoughtfully... It burned my mind... Ouch.
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Post by darkmooneternal on Mar 9, 2005 10:35:25 GMT -5
It's so pretty! ^-^ I love it very much. I can definately see how it might relate to Kikyou. It's cool that you chose a point of view most people don't take.
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Post by anna on Mar 9, 2005 17:16:12 GMT -5
thank you^^i'm starting to feel better about my poetry
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Post by victoria45 on Mar 27, 2005 20:02:00 GMT -5
oh its really good
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